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Friday, 24 April 2020

WW1 Writing 2020

WW1
I bet just before the world war people were chased out of their houses by the government to go to the war so they could fight against the bad team. 28 July November 1918 the first world war happened and it was one of the bloodiest wars in the world. And if I was a soldier I would have smelt dust blood and sweat. If I was a soldier I would have seen bodies piling up dark-sky guns. If I was a soldier I would have heard commands being shouted guns shooting grenades and loud bangs at people running. There would be nurses hurring to help people in the war described it as hell because some of their friends or family could have died and 40 million people died and then they told that Story to their family and then that was how ANZAC day was created

2 comments:

  1. Well done for writing a recount about World war 1. I can see how you are using your senses chart plan while writing. Good job!

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  2. how did you no that 4 millon people died

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